Friday, 8 April 2016

Kiana's Easter Egg




This is my egg story about Mrs Pou’s eggs and this is my picture and I hope you  like it.      : ) : o

2 comments:

  1. Hello Kiana. I enjoyed reading your Easter writing. I like the way you have used different font for effect.
    Do you watch Seven Days? :)

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  2. Hi Kiana
    Your story and egg are sensational. I really like how you have explained what the egg look’s like. I think you are a good artist. But it will be better to make your writing a bit thicker next time.

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