Wednesday, 18 May 2016

Tess'a Hiwi the Kiwi Story

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  1. Anonymous22 June 2016 at 11:47

    Hi Tess
    I love the story, I love how they get stranded.It reminds me a bit of Pinocchio, when he gets swallowed up by the whale. Remember that every time you make someone say something, it is on a new line.
    Freya

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  2. Lara28 July 2016 at 16:40

    Great story and I love your descriptive use of language. Remember Q is always followed by a U (quickly not qwickly!) Love your writing, hugs Mum X

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