Kia ora Darrius. You made a good start on your thinglink. Please use capital letters for proper nouns (names) and full stops so it makes it easier for your audience to read. It was a great to see a bit of your pepeha i te reo Maori.
Hi Darrius, the thing I love about your Thinglink is that your intro is really interesting and I like the way you put your pepeha in and your hotspots are in the right place. But you need to remember to put capital letters at the start of sentences and for names as well. From Izaiah.
Kia ora Darrius. You made a good start on your thinglink. Please use capital letters for proper nouns (names) and full stops so it makes it easier for your audience to read. It was a great to see a bit of your pepeha i te reo Maori.
ReplyDeleteHi Darrius, the thing I love about your Thinglink is that your intro is really interesting and I like the way you put your pepeha in and your hotspots are in the right place. But you need to remember to put capital letters at the start of sentences and for names as well. From Izaiah.
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